Than a child's laugh
Blankets are made for snuggling
And should thus be at least big enough
For two
Healthy or not,
Food should taste delicious
Or it's a waste of time
A child's mind should
Always be engaged in something wonderful
And usually is
(If you just bother to ask)
And "Popeye" cartoons are really fun
When one is drinking...
OK then...we can accept this as the manifesto of the revolt. Actually it works just fine for that purpose.
ReplyDeleteSeriously though nicely done and it projects the imagery you wanted to communicate though I might rethink that last verse in the edit unless the idea is to relate it through the whole thing back to the first verse.
I love it and agree 100%
ReplyDelete"Truths" truth in writer's hand
ReplyDeleteIndia is Religion Country . Religion pepole believe in god they are also believe superstition they also visit temples if you want some Religion songs
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